Retsuka
thalayla@yahoo.com
http://....
Someone else's site led me here
Commenting on: Sephiroth: A Fan
Girl's Perspective Heh. Pretty cool essay ^_^
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Aer_Seph4eva
Aer_seph4eva@yahoo.co.uk
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Commenting on: Wither I haven't
read a poetic fic like this in a long time. Very tragic yet
very beautiful. I believe that this is yet another one of your greatest
pieces you have written LS. I liked the way you used metaphor to its limits.
Great job.
Ja ne
Aer_seph4eva
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Retsuka
thalayla@yahoo.com
http://....
Someone else's site led me here
Commenting on:
In the Cold, Lonely Darkness Interesting.
I think their attraction came on too quickly tho,
especially Aeris'.
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Hans Konig
porsche_6hotmail.com
A friend told me about this site
Commenting on: Playing With Fire
A thrilling tale of lust and chains. Very .... WOW.. Didn't know you had
it in you to write like this. Very intense. Good flow.
Very hot!
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Hans Konig
porsche_6@hotmail.com
A friend told me about this site
Commenting on: Path of Seduction
Interesting! Very Interesting!
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D'Artagnan (AKA Hyperbole)
blue_mage3000@hotmail.com
I came here from a message board
Commenting on: Wither WAAAAHHHH!
Lady S, it was so sad! *cries* But it was very beautiful and poetic. I always
love reading your fics. They're so great.
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Retsuka
thalayla@yahoo.com
http://....
Someone else's site led me here
Commenting on:
Wither Pretty cool.
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Retsuka
thalayla@yahoo.com
http://....
Someone else's site led me here
Commenting on:
To Love a One Winged Angel Pretty good.
I think the them falling in love came a little too
quickly tho. Should have eased into
it more.
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kaitlyn
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Commenting on: The Paths We Walk
please update! I've been waiting for so long and it is
the best story!
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Sam
I got here because I know
you...somehow
Commenting on: Wither very
poetic...
Very, very
poetic.
i am a little boat...
well, you know what i'm talking
about--though everyone else reading this may think i'm
crazy :)
it's interesting, quite unlike most of your other stuff i've read. what on earth inspired
you? if its the Bible (the dust to dust part) don't
tell me.
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Shiba, the Queen
ShibaGenius@aol.com
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Commenting on:
Falling Fascinating.
"Falling" fed into my interest in psychology. Brainwashing is term I
hear used so loosely, but this serves as an excellent example of how truly
malignant it can be. What a crime, the theft of the soul.
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Blue Angel
Fanfiction.net led me here
Commenting on: Playing With Fire
What can I say? It was fantastic! An actual plot to go with the lemon would
have made it a lot more interesting. Just to see the progression of how everything
came to the event but it *is* a PWP so no complaints. After all the sexual
tension in 'Dream of Me' and it going nowhere I think this story was a nice
release for it.
Very kinky and
so very fitting for a dark Sephie. He's not nice but you can still sense some of the tender
feelings he has for her.
I really hope for a sequel to
the story. It doesn't have to be anything really big, maybe just a look into
how their lives will be from now on. Actually I wish there were more stories
like that. No big adventures or problems, just a story about a couple's
everyday life who happen to be not so normal. But if
not... a confrontation with Cloud and the others would be something to see. A
wonder how Aeris would react? Would she act like a
good little pet a follow her master or...
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kaitlyn
kaite@rennagade.com
A Search Engine led me here
Commenting on: Other I have a
couple of fics i would like to comment on:
DREAM OF ME: I seriously am in
love With this fic! it is very
good, especially considering some of the junk that I've read (and written). can't wait till u update!
THE PATHS WE WALK:Very cool fanfic! can't wait till u update! Marianna is a very good OC, by the
way.
Lady Sanzennine,
Can you plz Email me when u update either of these
fics? if you can, thnks, if
u can't, its ok.
and finally, every single fanfic
I've read on this site is REALLY good! Auf Wiedersehen,
kaitlyn
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lucy
lucy@lucyspage.com
http://www.lucyspage.com
A Webring
led me here
Commenting on: Wither Hi, just a
quick buzz to say how much i liked your site, keep up
the good work, lucy :-)
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Sarah
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Commenting on: The Right Moment
This story is very good!!! But when is it going to continue? Please don't leave
me on a cliff hanger!
Looking
forward to the next chapter(s).
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Sarah
Scorpiochick89@aol.com
I found this page by some other
means that you forgot to list
Commenting on: No Choice Left
Great fic! But, one comment of criticism: You Didn't Finish!!
WWWWWAAAAAAHHHHH!! How am I supposed to sleep not knowing what happens next!?!?
Please hurry and finish! Oh yea! Put some more romance between Aeris and Sephiroth!!! :drool:
Well, keep up the good work!
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Retsuka
thalayla@yahoo.com
http://....
Someone else's site led me here
Commenting on: Bloodwine Very good! ^___^ Interesting
interpretation of Vincent. Very uncommon, I think. Well, maybe I haven't
read too many Vincent-is-a-vampire fics. Anyway, keep writing! ^___^
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eman
manuel_sk8er@yahoo.com.au
http://www.ffreign.cjb.net
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led me here
Commenting on:
Other Man ure sites cool, and ure
fan art and fan fictions are sick, keep it up man.
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cathy
pleco22@hotmail.com
A Webring
led me here
Commenting on: Dream of Me I'm
LOVIN this story!! I cant wait 'till you update again,
you an amazing writer keep it up!
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Retsuka
thalayla@yahoo.com
http://....
Someone else's site led me here
Commenting on: Evolution of
Innocence Great story! ^__^ A fresh change from the endless crap-fiction out
there ^__^
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Kevin
ktran94@hotmail.com
I got here because I know
you...somehow
Commenting on: Playing With Fire
Well..! cough, cough. I didn't think you had it in
you. Chains, gold none the less. Is this what you
think of when your not worrying?
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Shiba, the Queen
ShibaGenius@aol.com
A Search Engine led me here
Commenting on: Playing With Fire
Naughty, naughty! Perfect for a night- owl such as myself
who is so easily bored. A great description of what Seph could be like.(::laughs like a child:: so, um, was it good for you,too?)Normally, I consider lemons taboo, but this one
tempted me like the devil himself. So, on with the sex!!! The dirty, dirty
sex!!! ::laughs maniacally:: mwa
ha ha ha ha
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Shiba, the Queen
ShibaGenius@aol.com
A Search Engine led me here
Commenting on:
To Love a One Winged Angel This fic was going quite well until the most recent
part. Are you mad?! I had a difficult
time sleeping after reading that. Ack! Rape? I have nightmares based on such things. Sephiroth is
too much of an intelligent creature to commit such a beastly act. Yet, this is
not the first time I've come across such a fic, and on
a Sephiroth-devoted site as well!!! And this was on an AeriSeph
site!! Personally, if I were in Aeris' shoes in this
fic, I would see to it that Sephiroth died a slow, painful death at my hands.
And then I would kill myself. I'd rather die after such a betrayal. Please,
someone explain to me what inspired this nightmare of an AeriSeph
fic. Certainly, I musn't be the only one with these
shocked, betrayed feelings. This must be Aeris'
nightmare. And the chocobo, her
son? How is this possible? Last time I checked, Sephiroth was not part chocobo. Maybe if it turns out to be some Seph-clone out of
control that raped her, I can forgive the author of this fic. ::shudders:: It is, afterall,
taking place in Hojo's lab. Who knows what he has
crawling around in that place. I do not mean to offend anyone with this review,
but I've been stewing over the matter for days now, and I must speak. I can see
Aeris forgiving all of Sephiroth's sins, but not
this. It's too personal. Please consider this constructive criticism, or just
the meaningless venting of an ardent Sephiroth fan. I am a passive person, and
argument does not become me . You would win.
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Paul
thematthis@hotmail.com
A Search Engine led me here
Commenting on: Sephiroth: A Fan
Girl's Perspective Hey, thanks a lot. See I'm dating a
girl who's obsessed with Sephiroth, and not that's it's a problem, I just find
it very interesting and more than a little perplexing. I am all about some
Final Fantasy, but I never even noticed Sephiroth would have such an effect on
women. Anyway, this story is insightful, well written, and gives me an edge to
understanding a bit more of this girl's mind. And hey, helping a guy do that is
no small feat, ya know? Have a nice day! -Paul
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guess
I got here because I know
you...somehow
Commenting on:
Playing With Fire your'e right, my faith in you
(through the littlre that i
read) has plummeted. see ya on monday,
luv.
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Danto mishimuto
young sephiroth@yahoo.com
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Commenting on: Playing With Fire
This is a very good lemon and I hope to see more soon however i would also like to see more intimit
details from u young one
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Deus Cubile
I got here because I know
you...somehow
Commenting on: Playing With Fire
Dear "A person that shall remain nameless":
Let me offer you a bit of
"constructive criticism". First of all, this is an amazing site that
totally fulfills it's purpose; offering riveting
content without annoying and meaningless animations. Second, I'm not sure if
you're demeaning the humble Times New Roman used as a general font, which is
still the default font in web browsers BECAUSE IT IS AN ACCEPTED STANDARD, or
the artistic font used in the titles and links, which is a PERSONAL AESTHETIC
CHOICE. Third, HTML is not a "thing of the past" as any half-decent
web designer would know, as there still will always be a need for a STANDARD,
EFFICIENT and FAST method of delivering a large amount of text which JAVA and
FLASH cannot offer. Lastly, I am wondering why an obvious and enlightened
design professional such as yourself can't even come
up with a better nickname than "A person that shall remain nameless"?
P.S. There are two ways of
analyzing why you did not include flash in your post.
1. You haven't woken up and
realized that HTML is a thing of the past!
2. The message board doesn't
include the ability to do so because..... IT'S NOT AT ALL NEEDED TO CONVEY THE
DATA THAT IS BEING PRESENTED
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A person that shall remain
nameless
N/A
http:/\you would like to know
A Webring
led me here
Commenting on: Playing With Fire
You really need to work on your web design and to
choose your fonts more carefully. You should also wake up and notice HTML is a
thing of the past and maybe you should explore the vast and wonderful worlds of
JAVA and FLASH.
Just a little constructive
criticism!!
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kaitlyn
A Webring
led me here
Commenting on: The Paths We Walk
I absolutly love this story! at
first i wasnt sure i wanted to read it (thats
me-stereotyping OC/sephiroth stories..) but i was tied from the first chapter! Marriana
is a great OC and perfect for helping out sephy (and
falling in love along the way) ;-)....Keep on writing Lady Sanzennine!!!!!
i cant wait to read the next
chapter!!!!!!!
-kaitlyn-
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kaitlyn
I found this page by some other
means that you forgot to list
Commenting on: Dream of Me Im so glad you updated this story! i love it!! keep the story comin!!!
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Emmy Lee
tempes_tide@hotmail.com
A Search Engine led me here
Commenting on: Vita, Amare, et Cruciamentum That's a
really good fanfic..one of
the best SxA I've seen...so could you email me when
you update? It'd be greatlu appreciated..
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Aer_seph4eva
Aer_seph4eva@yahoo.co.uk
A Webring
led me here
Commenting on: Playing With Fire
*applauds*. Now that's three memorable lemon fics I have read. I hope that I
will see a few more. Please could you notify me if you do! ^_^
ANd you better do a sequel..
Ja ne
Aer_seph4eva
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DracOnyx
draconyx1@hotmail.com
Fanfiction.net led me here
Commenting on: In the Cold,
Lonely Darkness AHHHHH! *twirls hair around figures in frustration* And they say I'm bad for the cliff hangers I leave! OY!
Please keep writing . . . this story has me so hooked it's not even funny . . .
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Mibu no Ookami
saitouhajime@saitou.zzn.com
Fanfiction.net led me here
Commenting on: In the Cold,
Lonely Darkness Oh gods!!! That was simply awesome, I
think I'll fail to find the proper words describing this fic... I'll try anyway
^_~ I really loved your other pieces (and am still following "Dream of
me" and hoping for more frequent updates *hinthint*
yes, I'm greedy) already posted on ff.net and imo
you're one of the best Sephiroth/Aerith-writers out there but this one is
clearly my favorite till date.
It was so immensely beautyful and tragic, really heartwrenching
in a good way. Some describtions were pure magic, so
easy to imagine: the scenes stood perfectly clear in front of my inner eye and
so powerful due to your wonderful way of storytelling. Oh, and the
"feeding"-scene was VERY erotic imo, I
loved that particular one ^_^
I liked the bittersweet taste of
their encounter: on one side the - luckily *cough* - small part of me fond of
sap was hoping for a conventional "happy" end because if anyone those
2 deserve it (especially Sephiroth *sigh*) but on the other hand I KNEW it
simply couldn't be and this'd be much more realistic due to the original gameplot and it feels more "right" because none
of the protagonists can or is willing to give up his/her views of life since
both are far beyond the point of no return... The finality and uniqueness of
the night and their joining before the inevitable end seems thus even more beautyfully tragic. Well, and there might be also my faible for tragic, bloody, tearful endings developed due to
my love of HongKong-movies and HeroicBloodshed
where the heroes always end unhappy and/or dead... ^_~ Actually I found myself
nearly in tears at the end of your story - which I can't remember happening
ever while reading a fanfic - because it was so sad
AND sweet *sigh*
Big compliment for NOT including
waffy declarations of eternal love from both parts:
very refreshing, appropriate for the serious situation with no future for any
relationship and in character imo.
Uh well, lately I'm starting to
feel lucky that I'm not a native speaker: if I'd knew more superlatives this
review would be probably endless ^_~ But I'd rather write a longer review (or
much longer...) and making sure to point out what I appreciate in a fic instead
of leaving the author guessing or with a simply "Great, luv it" since I know from my own experience from
drawing that such a comment is nice but not very helpful to the creator and can
be used for every random piece without thinking.
Please keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to reading your next installments
and possibly new fics. Ja ne, Tsume-kun
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DracOnyx
draconyx1@hotmail.com
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Commenting on: In the Cold,
Lonely Darkness You know . . . I had never really
thought of that, but that passage from Hamlet really does make a lot of sense
when connected to Sephiroth. I'm really enjoying the story, and I'm sure the
rest of it will be just as good as the 3 chapters I've read so far. Oh . . .
and I never would have guessed that English was not your native language.
You're doing really well : )
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DracOnyx
draconyx1@hotmail.com
Fanfiction.net led me here
Commenting on: In the Cold,
Lonely Darkness just one word . . .
WOW!
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Little Blue Lolita
cheerfulpromise@sailorjupiter.com
Fanfiction.net led me here
Commenting on: In the Cold,
Lonely Darkness *sniffs* Ah! That was so damn beautiful and sad! *sobs*
I loved it!
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Aer_seph4eva
Aer_seph4eva@yahoo.co.uk
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led me here
Commenting on: In the Cold,
Lonely Darkness *Squeals with excitement* You made
Sephiroth leave Aeris without finishing. *pouts* Meanie!! I really enjoyed this chapter and if I were in Aeris' position I would rather look like a peasant than a
whore. Keep up the great work! Is it possible if you can notify me when you do
your next update?
Ja ne
Aer_seph4eva aka
EJC
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Aer_seph4eva
Aer_seph4eva@yahoo.co.uk
A Webring
led me here
Commenting on: In the Cold,
Lonely Darkness WOW! *Applauds!* Now I have read two Aer/Seph
lemons that will be forever etched into my memory. You go girl!
Ja ne
Aer_seph4eva aka EJC.
P.S. Thanks for the email
notification. I really appreciated it. Now I feel like I owe you.
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Ardwynna
djynnjah@yahoo.com
I got here because I know
you...somehow
Commenting on: Dream of Me Good
chapter! It does feel like there's not enough A&S interaction for the wait
but it's good to see that Avalanche isn't taking it sitting down. I love the
insight into what the palace staff is thinking about the situation.
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dia_na
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Commenting on: Dream of Me oops i was commenting on dream of me, i
didnt get chance to read the other one yet!
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