CLAWS OF DESTINY's NEW HOME


The Story So Far.....

Welcome to the Kingdom of Murr. A land of technology which barely equals our own Dark Ages. Although, they know how to tap into the powers of their planet. In earlier years, there was a great war leader known as Sir James 'Lion' Claw. His wife, Mary, died during the birth of two healthy sons. In the castle of Murr, Queen Lylas lost her husband to an unknown illness.

A year later, Queen Lylas fears the future of her throne because she never bore any children to her late husband. With her powers of seduction she enchants Lion Claw. The two fall into lust and have a daughter. They name the child Feeyona. Lion Claw's two boys are raised in the castle, but with strict discipline. Feeyona, on the other hand, learns leadership skills and the ways to the kingdom.

When the boys turn 18 their father, Lion Claw, gives them the names of Aeophis Claw and Darrius Claw. The Queen and Lion Claw feel it is necessary for the youth to explore the real world outside the borders of the castle and the kingdom. Aeophis Claw, Darrius Claw, and Feeyona embark on a journey which lasts longer than anyone ever thought.

Three years later, the trio returns to the Kingdom of Murr. Although, the Kingdom of Murr is no more. They came back to home to nothing. The story truly begins when Aeophis, Darrius, and Feeyona must sort out who caused the fall of Murr. Revenge may be sweet, but it may take a lifetime to fulfill.

Who could have done it?

Some say its Vitar and his clan of vampires and other creatures of the night.

Others point to the forest where assassins and thieves call their home.

Then there are those that who were in their own Kingdom of Murr.

These places and others will be explored by Aeophis, Darrius, and Feeyona in Claws of Destiny. There are many kinds of characters they will encounter. Some will help others will deceive. The poor trio may have to explore across their planet to find answers. Who knows what1s out there?


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Promotional Cover (Collector Times)


Let me know what you think of the story so far... Its based on my childhood RPG I made for my friends. I know these characters personally, but they just don't know their going to be the stars of a comic book : )

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CAST OF CHARACTERS


Aeophis Claw is sick with revenge. All these events from above have really hurt him. The pic you see here is a little down the line of the series due to his weapons. When they arrive from their journey, Aeophis Claw only has some basic weapons.


Darrius Claw keeps his cool and is always open to other people. He is not as vengeful as his brother. He uses a heavy sword which prevents him from doing any quick blows, but the ones he gives are lethal. His shield is quite unique, but he won't even know that for awile.

FEEYONA's new tasks will take her through a transformation and eventually change her appearance inside and out.


WHAT NEXT? Well I have completed the script of #1 and people have been very happy with it : ) I am finished with penciling 18 pages. I am lettering pages daily from now on. As soon as 18 pages are on the net I'll go back and begin to gradually reveal the story when time allows. Instead of waiting another year for 18 more pages to appear I'll attempt to post them as I go along. I can't promise anything because I have Art School to worry about in the near future.


PREVIEW OF Pages 15-17 without balloons are HERE of issue #1 of Claws of Destiny

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